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  1. SFOSOK

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    She looks at me with sadness in her eyes
    What has been taken can never be replaced
    Her choice was one of severed fate
    Though this suffering I cannot hide
    I take this weight in full stride

    Her words, her touch they burrow deep
    Into the soul with an outward reach
    The thorns of love, they claw away
    To destroy my heart soon this day

    Odd it is this thing called love
    To be thrown away like a stray dog
    Kept for so long with no where to go
    Back to his master he returns to know

    How can something so long ago hurt so much?
    The heart is shattered with just one touch
    The pieces I am left to collect myself
    And set this vase upon a shelf
    In hopes to be dusted off one day
    For it is this love I pray

    -Kellenberger, Jonathan J.
     
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    GutterPunk I = Greatest Dood

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    awww touching!
     
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    very good....
    does the author have any other poetry?
     
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    SFOSOK 939 Goin Strong

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    Yes though most of it was back in the days I liked to complain about pretty much everything.

    Just wanted to get back into writing so I thought I would start with this. I'm glad you enjoy it though I have some better ones and hopefully some more to follow.


    I should have seperated some of the ideas and branched off specific poems for each but I just figured I'd write and see how it came together.
     
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    you complain? who's been spreading these rumours?:hmm:
     

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