Waiting In The Dark

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  1. |2A|N

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    Waiting In The Dark

    I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world,
    but what is so free about living in a world,
    is this the free world we really live to know.

    I envy the small things in life, the things most people take for granted,
    I always see how people pretend, pretend to be something,
    something they are turned into and cant stand up against,
    is this the price of failure, the price in such a free world.

    I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world,
    waiting in the dark but for what, waiting for my turn,
    waiting In such a free world.

    I see children running, but from what, a society they know so little about,
    their innocence takin away from them, are they stuck,
    stuck inside such a free world.

    I ask myself, is that me I see waiting in the dark,
    a world of opportunity suddenly that struck me down,
    opportunity in such a free world.

    I find myself filled with your breath you and I share,
    it's harder to breathe, is this the price of living,
    sharing in such a free world.

    I ask myself, what does it take to live in such a free world,
    waiting in the dark but for what, waiting for the consequence of my crimes,
    crimes of consequence in such a free world.

    Is this the free world we really live to know,
    or is this the cost of Ignorance,
    there is nothing left in such a free world,
    when you have already taken It all.
     
  2. Mac Daddy

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    Well written and a strong message man :)
     
  3. |2A|N

    |2A|N SE7EN57

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    Thanks, I wrote this about 3 years ago, among some other things I have posted on here as well.

    I know as a person that people have more in common than we tend to think we do, after all we are all human :) which is why I post these things from time to time. I write because I know people can relate to it, and well it makes me feel good to. :)
     
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    You are most welcome and thanks for posting them ... writing is a reflection of the person you are and a form of true expression like music ;)
     

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