wrote this for a girl......#2

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  1. TJ-

    TJ- New Member

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    so u say u wanted me to post more... here is a short one....,, was for the same chick

    verity--

    to know that you smile more is worth unlimited funds,

    to know i had a part of it, makes me feel like life has just begun,

    to know there is new life to your heart,

    means that this is just the start,

    its unlike me to give up so much,

    but to know i make you happy, helps us keep in touch,

    for you are special in every way,

    and to see those two words you sent me,

    lets me know that this is worth all of my days,

    the verity of these words, need not be doubted,

    for you are the goddess, in which i belive,

    that there is a future between you and me,

     
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    TJ- New Member

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    cheesy i know,,,, but hey it works....!!
     
  3. Nicky-chan

    Nicky-chan formally Elclair

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    Nicly done cept the first line. Take out funds and replace it with happyness if this is actualy gunna be given to a girl.
     
  4. Calliers

    Calliers Administrator/Editor Staff Member

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    *quickly presses ctrl+a & ctrl+c's into antoher doc. *

    hey, im rubbish at this kinda stuff, thnx man :)
     
  5. halocarbon

    halocarbon New Member

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    then never come here, any way what are you????????? :evil:
     
  6. Calliers

    Calliers Administrator/Editor Staff Member

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    :lol:

    I'm a cross between an elf, a reindeer and three frogs (of different species) :D
     
  7. YAYitsAndrew

    YAYitsAndrew Anti-Piracy Poster Boy

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    Don't force a rhyme. Poems don't have to rhyme
     
  8. Drakon

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    that's true...:)
     

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