YAY it's Poetry

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  1. YAYitsAndrew

    YAYitsAndrew Anti-Piracy Poster Boy

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    No she likes me too, but not enough to give up on her bf. They seperated for a couple weeks (6th time) and we had a lot of fun together, but then he started begging her to get back together and she chose him cause of their history. They're already fighting...

    My expert(?) advice to myself is just keep on living and wait it out. If it's meant to happen I'll get my shot. Until then sometimes I miss her like crazy so I write.
     
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    there are so many other girls out there Andrew, your a handsome, creative and resourceful fellow, surely there is a bright new flower in the garden for you, go take a walk outside and smell the roses mate, that is what I do. My girlfriend and I have known each other since we were children living in Germany where our fathers were stationed, we have had lots of lovers, spouses and travelled the world, and yet we returned to be with each other again here in the UK for awhile, she is travelling back to the US to settle her legal affairs and get a better paying job, and I will stay here as long as they pay me well, but I never stop loving her, and she I. What I am trying to say is that we both know what distances, time and life places before us, and we act accordingly, but we are two very independent people and that is what we love about each other among other things, so I guess we shall be together again in the near future...but we are friends Andrew, that never changes...ya know what I mean? no matter what happens we still have each other and help each other, although our lives and the pathes we choose take us many places, we remain looking forward to the future. If we both were sidetracked or mired in other loves that didnt work out, or waited for loves that would never be realized to our expectations, we would never have become fast friends...Andrew...there are lots and lots of lovers out there....but to find a love, you must first be able to give without any condition, your own love to your partner, and remain hopeful I suppose that it will be returned, but there are not absolutes are there. Hang in there, keep writing your poetry, it is the window to your soul but it also allows a level of intimacy that sets you free IMO.
     
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    Last night was great.
    Winning beirut while they still had eight?
    No.
    Seeing your smile put me in this state.
     
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    oh stop it :lol:
     
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    MY poetry thread! This one might need a little work at the beginning

    Let's say you're Gretel
    Dropping hope-flavored breadcrumbs
    So that you can backpedal
    When your desire succumbs.
    Let's say he's the witch
    In a candy cane coven.
    You supply him a kiss
    As he's heating his oven.
    If you stay there and sweeten
    Instead of being a tourist
    Then your crumbs will be eaten
    By the birds of the forest.
     
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    whoa.....
     
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    I rewrote the beginning. EDIT: I like the previous one better I think

    Let's say you're Gretel.
    Running away, breadcrumbs behind
    Hooking me on a riddle
    Only you can unwind.
    Let's say he's the witch
    of a candy cane coven.
    You supply him a kiss
    as he's heating his oven.
    If you stay there and sweeten
    Instead of being a tourist,
    Then your crumbs will be eaten
    By the birds of the forest.
     
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    I like it...
    kinda has a Strawberry 23 kinda feel to it.
     
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    I just finished redoing www.yayitsandrew.com and it'll house all my poetry for now. There's even a new poem that I put up there (my new personal favorite) but I'm a bastard and I'm going to make you visit my site to see it. Thanks for all the feedback
     

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